A pic of my Girlfriend and sister

[Dcrymes84]

Hey guys and gals i just wanted to share a few pictures i took with ya'll this past weekend. Im just now finding out about this site online. So please forgive me. Well here we go

A picture of my girlfriend

And a few pictures of my 8 year old sister Madison at her pageant at North Greenville college in Greenville south carolina

 

[dizzyg44]

Hi neighbor! (from charleston)

Nice shots...

I'm not a professional but my opinion is....

1. I wish her eyes weren't so dark

2. The shadow on the left of her face is distracting.

2/3. needs more light on the face.

Over all they look good though, and few more simple adjustments and they could be really good.

 

[AverageJoe]

The first shot looks like it was lit with a flash straight on, that takes out a bit of the natural contrast.

The second two are very nicely shot.

BTW, welcome to the forum.

 

[Dcrymes84]

Thanks guys for the comments.

 

[jong]

Hi neighbor! (from charleston)

Nice shots...

I'm not a professional but my opinion is....

1. I wish her eyes weren't so dark

2. The shadow on the left of her face is distracting.

2/3. needs more light on the face.

Over all they look good though, and few more simple adjustments and they could be really good.

i agree with dizzy ( also from charleston ). # 2 could be better with a fill light on her faces, #1 i dont like the lighting , # 3 possing is a little bit stressfull for her