A Tattooed Country Girl

[Tinstafl]

Well Emily can dress urban or be a country girl. She has bonfires in her back yard so this is not a huge stretch. I know I have them but then again I have a tractor and am a country boy but I never saw any country girls like this growing up.

Emily Rose-20190909_DSC5628.jpg by Tins Pics, on Flickr

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Emily Rose-20190909_DSC5622.jpg by Tins Pics, on Flickr

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Emily Rose-20190909_DSC5586.jpg by Tins Pics, on Flickr

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Emily Rose-20190909_DSC5617.jpg by Tins Pics, on Flickr

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[DanOstergren]

Ok, a detail that is blaring over every other detail of these shots are the indentations on her legs. Those 100% need to be removed, otherwise I feel they ruin each and every one of these shots.

 

[Derrel]

yeah, the strap indentations are really killing these...

 

[Jeff15]

Lets hope she still likes all those tattoos when she is 50, nice shooting.......

 

[Dean_Gretsch]

I agree with the above. The first thing I noticed were the leg indentations also.They really kill the shots.

 

[Tinstafl]

Ok Thanks I will work on them

 

[AlanKlein]

Ok Thanks I will work on them

Yes, You should definitely do another shoot with her.

 

[tirediron]

Any time a model removes a next-to-skin item of clothing (aside from very, loose shirts & wraps), you should expect to allow at least 30 minutes, and up to an hour for the skin to return to normal.

 

[ebyelyakov]

Great posing. I do not see any visible signs of retouch which would have made the images much better. As per the feedback already given.
I would have cleaned the skin (some few temporary imperfections like pimples) and attended to the teeth as well - they appear to be on the yellow side.

Neatpicking - the rotten/chipped patch at the right edge of the image bothers me considering how much it contrasts with the rest.

 

[Granddad]

Great posing. I do not see any visible signs of retouch which would have made the images much better. As per the feedback already given.
I would have cleaned the skin (some few temporary imperfections like pimples) and attended to the teeth as well - they appear to be on the yellow side.

Neatpicking - the rotten/chipped patch at the right edge of the image bothers me considering how much it contrasts with the rest.

I agree. It may be a question of the photographer's or the model's personal choice about removing temporary blemishes etc but to ME these are shot in pin-up style and in that style the blemishes just don't fit. The photos will be around a lot longer than the blemishes, even the couple of pimple scars on her legs will be gone in a year or two and I can see no reason to immortalise them.

I didn't notice the patch on the background at first but now it's been pointed out I can't unsee it.

Very good work otherwise but the details....

 

[Tinstafl]

I will go over them again and see if i can remove some of the marks. I had a limited time and had to shoot one set out of order as others were coming into the studio.
I appreciate the feedback though

 

[Granddad]

I see edits are allowed on your images, here's my take on one of them with 10 minutes in Portrait Pro and P.S. Not perfect but OK for the time I spent.

 

[Tinstafl]

I see edits are allowed on your images, here's my take on one of them with 10 minutes in Portrait Pro and P.S. Not perfect but OK for the time I spent.
View attachment 180022

Thanks

 

[Derrel]

Grandad, your quick retouching looks pretty good

 

[Donde]

Nice job Grandad but think the leg indentations add a bit of edge...like she just left a "bondage" shoot.