I think there's potential there, but I find it a bit too tight, especially on the RH side. It might also benefit from some perspective correction, and I think a monochrome conversion would suit it well.
I llike it. My first on the thumbnail was "convert to B&W". When I opened it I see the color in the metal sides, thats what would have grabbed my eye for a quick shot. A little more depth to the bottom might help. Cropped that tight to the bottom makes it look more like a ramp on the horizontal run. My 2cents worth.