I think you got lovely shots of the bride/couple especially#12 & 13 and 20; you take interesting and unique photos (like the one of the tie!). I'd think about the framing of some, if that were my dress I'd want to see the whole thing rather than ceiling, but I think what you might have been seeing was the light hitting the ceiling which gives it some interest; I'd have thought about maybe a vertical shot? or some way to include the entire dress and the light above the window.
There are some where there's a lot of space above the heads but the subjects have no feet, or fingers are cropped/not in the frame, etc. Some of the B&W photos look gray more than black and white, but I like the outdoor shots at the end, those are pretty cool and I think them being backlit works.
very nice stuff, robin! love the dance shots, 30 and 31 are beautifully lit. great job capturing the emotional shots too! a few nitpicks:
11 is a bit too blown for my tastes. the light fringing around their faces is a bit much, kinda bleaches the whole photo out.
12, her face is way too greenish/yellow on my monitor.
28- Not digging the blur at all. whats going on with it in that shot? some of the flowers are in focus, some aren't, and the sides of their faces are blurred. i much prefer 27.