All of Shelby (16 pic warning)

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These are all of which I thought were not completely awful.. lol The one's I will share with her. Can you lovely people of TPF tell me which are your favorites?

In no particular order..
1 shelby-1 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-2 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

this ones just black /white
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shelby-1-3 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-4 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-5 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-6 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-7 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-8 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-9 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-10 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-11 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-12 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-13 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-14 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-15 by capturedbybc, on Flickr

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shelby-1-16 by capturedbybc, on Flickr
 

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You did well. Lovely colors and processing. Nice detail too, not all fake-looking and retouched (I looked at some of these at Original size on Flickr,so the detail was appreciated) I thought your seated pose with her in shorts and white T-shirt in front of the stucco and brick wall was very well-balanced, and a perfect example of when to shoot an environmental portrait in a horizontal manner--she's seated, and the pose is much wider than it is tall, and the environment was perfect for it!
 
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#1 and #4, do family photos there.. trust me! It will take you a longgg way. GJ.

Thanks! This is by far my favorite location in my city to shoot.. I did maternity for my neighbor here and my son's 1st birthday/cake smash pics here as well as my friend's daughters cake smash.
 

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13 I like by farrr the best, followed by 10.

9 is a sort of bizarre pose, 11 is a little risque, and I'm not a big fan of this model's dazed/creeped out look. More smiles! That's why 13 really stands out.

The locations and technical execution are great. I suggest focusing most on getting genuine emotions / engaging the model.
 
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13 I like by farrr the best, followed by 10.

9 is a sort of bizarre pose, 11 is a little risque, and I'm not a big fan of this model's dazed/creeped out look. More smiles! That's why 13 really stands out.

The locations and technical execution are great. I suggest focusing most on getting genuine emotions / engaging the model.

I'd really like to get better on posing. More often than not I let them do their thing.. Whatever that naturally may be and then tweak it... Head turns.. Chin up.. Hand here or there.. Etc.

Thank you for your comments.
 

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She does have some "huh" facial expressions, but the set is very sound technically. Is she a pro modeler?

And have her smile for godssake!
 
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She does have some "huh" facial expressions, but the set is very sound technically. Is she a pro modeler?

And have her smile for godssake!

She's from mm. This was her first "real" shoot. I too prefer smiles and I did ask for the ones I got. Lol
 

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3, 7, and 13 for me. Good job Bonnie. You are defiantly going out of your comfort zone.
 

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She does have some "huh" facial expressions, but the set is very sound technically. Is she a pro modeler?

And have her smile for godssake!

She's from mm. This was her first "real" shoot. I too prefer smiles and I did ask for the ones I got. Lol

Lol, working with the "talent" is always tricky. #13 is my favorite, because of the smile.
 

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I was going to mention how well these were done, but she needs to smile more..... then I saw how many others said the same thing. So Ill just, well done. :)
 

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I like 13 and 10.
 

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I was going to say the light was a little hot... and you should have dissuaded her from wearing white because it's completely blown out... I was also going to say that while the setting is pretty there are many where I think there is way too much of the setting and she is often too centered... but there are a lot more experienced people shooters here than me that aren't complaining, so... I guess I'm wrong?
 

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