I disagree I think if I keep shooting and there is stuff I am doing wrong I will start developing habits and habits are hard to break.... I think its always good to get help and suggestions!!!
I have to agree with this. You should know what to do before you do it, and you'll know what to look for BEFORE you make mistakes. I, unfortunately, didn't go that route, or I might be a lot better than I am (and I'm probably terrible...but I'm usually hard on myself).
I'm no pro, so my "critiques" (which aren't really critiques) will probably catch some flack, but hey...I'm not afraid to offer my
opinion on things.
I think your shots have potential. The first picture is my favorite. It's a little dull, but I like the direction you were headed with the shot. Are you shooting in RAW? If so, you may try playing with some simple Post Processing. You could make that shot look really nice, IMO. But anyway, there's not much need to worry about PP just yet. Worry about getting your composition right, understanding how the camera works, and all the "what happens if..."s out there. Best thing about digital, you don't have to keep your mistakes. Although, I do...they're a good tool to see what you did wrong.
Keep shooting, you'll do just fine!