Am I overdoing it?

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This is a rough edit of some photoshop work I'm doing on this picture.
So far I've done levels, curves, and I've airbrushed the face as well as did some color correction to the sky. I want it to have the magazine "fake" feel to it, but I don't want to overdo it. Somethings wrong, I can't tell what it is though.

 

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I see alot of hard, almost like penciled-in lines around the figure; makes her look like she was cut/pasted over a cloudysky pic. post up the original

 

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The picture itself sucked. I was trying to save it on Cs3 though.

Like I said, it's rough. I still got to go over the mask a little bit to get rid of those lines.

 

[third_shift|studios]

hard to say, man..your kinda polishing a turd here.

 

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I know I know.