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AMOMENT

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Here is another shoot I recently did and a few photos from it. I know there is always great need for major improvement. Thanks for taking the time and having a look.

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I am enamoured by her beauty....wow cutie...I like more 1st and fifth.....4th is an excellent portrait....was it available light...no flash light in her eyes? thnx for sharing.
 
You didn't ask for critique, so I'm not going to give it other than to say there is alot of room for improvement as you said. Also, watch your PP work. On the last pic there's a smudge of something on her left pupil camera right that is showing up on the eyelid. Slip of the hand it looks like to me.
 
Since my last visit you have improved, in the last one I can actually see you in the eye's reflection. I think #5 would be creative if you gave the shot some noise and aging treatments. Better focus, still got to watch details like smudge and drool. Keep shooting. :thumbup:
 
I'd like everyhting but the face softened. To much on the same plane and for a soft little delicate baby girl, too much too sharp.
 
You didn't ask for critique, so I'm not going to give it other than to say there is alot of room for improvement as you said. Also, watch your PP work. On the last pic there's a smudge of something on her left pupil camera right that is showing up on the eyelid. Slip of the hand it looks like to me.
.....You can critique. I'm up for it. Thanks!
 
Since my last visit you have improved, in the last one I can actually see you in the eye's reflection. I think #5 would be creative if you gave the shot some noise and aging treatments. Better focus, still got to watch details like smudge and drool. Keep shooting. :thumbup:
THANKS so much! I do see that. So much to think about in a split second which is why practice does make..well, better at least!
 
What a great shoot you have done i love the first and 4th shoot very much. So preety and lovely baby it is.
 

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