Attempt to take portrait c&c pls

[zxorated]

manual focus here with 50mm 1.8 prime
i like it but then again i am an amateur, so i need experts advices!

 

[MissCream]

It's pretty under exposed. I can't see your exif data to help you change anything!

 

[zxorated]

I have no idea what I did to delete the Exif files. This picture is lightly processed through Lightroom. If I remember correctly 1/80, 4.5, ISO 400... Perhaps I should have increased the ISO since it was indoor.

 

[MissCream]

Yeah, I usually don't like to shoot over 400 ISO, I probably would have put my shutter speed to 1/60. You can always adjust the exposure or fill light in Lightroom.

 

[Edsport]

Here's your exif...
Manual exposure, 1/160 sec, f/4.5, ISO 800, Compensation: -1/3.

 

[MissCream]

Here's your exif...
Manual exposure, 1/160 sec, f/4.5, ISO 800, Compensation: -1/3.

That'll do it.