B&W for C/C

PerfectlyFlawed

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 2, 2010
Messages
2,408
Reaction score
19
Location
Tempe, Arizona
Website
WWW.feliciakelsayphotography.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
My 2 year old daughter playing out in the garden, watering.

Does it work as Black and White? PP done in LR3.

5032078473_362eeef5d9_b.jpg



*SOFTER B&W* Version. Does this look better soft, rather than as sharp as i have it?
5034359858_937471aa16_b.jpg


COLORED
5034387310_7a36286807_b.jpg




 
Last edited:

LaFoto

Just Corinna in real life
Staff member
Supporting Member
Joined
Feb 1, 2004
Messages
34,813
Reaction score
822
Location
Lower Saxony, Germany
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Yes. It does! Very well so!
The cropped off little hand is a pity, though...
 

RobNZ

TPF Noob!
Joined
Jan 17, 2010
Messages
543
Reaction score
2
Location
New Zealand
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Great shot, I studied this for awhile, hand doesnt bother me to be honest, my eye is not drawn to it, my eye is drawn to the little girls face, the expression, the hair, the water and the lines in the frame.

I imported it into cs5 and had a play with it because something was bugging me at this size, its a little too sharp, so applied some surface blur to a copied layer, threshold 20, radius 5 and then reduced the opacity of the layer to 59% to find the balance between soft and sharp I had what I wanted to see.

The reasoning for the above, its a soft delicate scene, not a hard and gritty one.

Call me crazy but thats how I see it being. ;)

I still think its a really nice shot as it is though.
 

Aayria

TPF Noob!
Joined
Mar 12, 2010
Messages
787
Reaction score
40
Location
U.S.
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit

mwcfarms

No longer a newbie, moving up!
Joined
Mar 16, 2010
Messages
2,655
Reaction score
179
Location
Southern Alberta
Website
www.deannachambers.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Yes I think here B&W is just fine. Nice scene, I too don't really notice the hand because my eyes are drawn across from her to the water. :thumbup:
 

900rr

TPF Noob!
Joined
Nov 14, 2008
Messages
112
Reaction score
0
Location
miami fl
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Love it ! Good contrast...
 

jackiejay

TPF Noob!
Joined
Sep 28, 2010
Messages
308
Reaction score
0
Location
Va
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
beautiful pic :)
 

Early

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 8, 2008
Messages
1,239
Reaction score
0
Location
Western NJ
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
It looks ok, but judging by the blouse, I'd bet it would look better in color. Play around with the composition, too, to get more impact.
 
OP
OP
PerfectlyFlawed

PerfectlyFlawed

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 2, 2010
Messages
2,408
Reaction score
19
Location
Tempe, Arizona
Website
WWW.feliciakelsayphotography.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Yes. It does! Very well so!
The cropped off little hand is a pity, though...
Aw, yeah :meh: I just noticed that..I was trying to quickly capture the moment and wasnt paying attention to where it was framed.

The reasoning for the above, its a soft delicate scene, not a hard and gritty one.
I think ill try another Edit, maybe soften it up a little and see how it looks.:)

I think it works very well.

Love this!

Yes I think here B&W is just fine. Nice scene, I too don't really notice the hand because my eyes are drawn across from her to the water. :thumbup:

Love it ! Good contrast...

yes,great job!

beautiful pic :)

^^ Thank you! :mrgreen:
 
OP
OP
PerfectlyFlawed

PerfectlyFlawed

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 2, 2010
Messages
2,408
Reaction score
19
Location
Tempe, Arizona
Website
WWW.feliciakelsayphotography.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
It looks ok, but judging by the blouse, I'd bet it would look better in color. Play around with the composition, too, to get more impact.

I actually didnt intend on it being B&W...but whyll playing with the PP, thats where it ended, I thought it really worked for it.
Ill post the color version as well...
 

Most reactions

New Topics

Top