Balconies - Life on the Outside

[ceeboy14]

 

[deeky]

I know they are there in the background, but I lose the concept of the immediate subject being a balcony without the rail on the right side. Makes everything feel pinches. I don't think it would need a lot of room, but definitely a rail.

 

[ceeboy14]

I have one more iteration of this image I will try later, but it could be it just isn't going to make it down the aisle. Thanks for the feedback,