Beauty is in the eye of the beholder C&C

Diffuser

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 12, 2012
Messages
90
Reaction score
8
Location
Dubai
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Interesting subject. Had a lot of fun with it today, but so difficult to get it right in PP.
I like his hairstyle though ;-) Any suggestions are more than welcome.

Camera Model: Canon EOS 60D, Flash Used: No, Focal Length: 70.0mm (35mm equivalent: -214...
Exposure Time: 0.0006 s (1/1600), Aperture: f/4.0, Focus Dist.: 1.49m, ISO Equiv.: 100
Whitebalance: Auto, Metering Mode: spot, Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)

Beauty_1.jpg
 

Forkie

Been spending a lot of time on here!
Joined
Feb 14, 2011
Messages
2,292
Reaction score
920
Location
Chiswick, London, UK
Website
www.ianforknall.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Nice headshot (he's a Maribou Stork by the way!).

Great close up, but the tilt isn't working - he's at an odd angle. Tilts on animals almost never work because animals are never tilted (they'd fall over!). The overall exposure is pretty good, but it could maybe do with a contrast boost.
 
OP
Diffuser

Diffuser

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 12, 2012
Messages
90
Reaction score
8
Location
Dubai
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Nice headshot (he's a Maribou Stork by the way!).

Great close up, but the tilt isn't working - he's at an odd angle. Tilts on animals almost never work because animals are never tilted (they'd fall over!). The overall exposure is pretty good, but it could maybe do with a contrast boost.

I wasn't aware of the tilt in relation to animals and how others would experience this in a picture, so this is excellent feedback for me to research! Thanks for your suggestions.
 

Forkie

Been spending a lot of time on here!
Joined
Feb 14, 2011
Messages
2,292
Reaction score
920
Location
Chiswick, London, UK
Website
www.ianforknall.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Also, just as an afterthought, if you'd shot it straight his beak would have created a nice leading line from the bottom left to the top right, right up to his face. In this shot, his beak cuts the shot vertically in half. :)
 

LaFoto

Just Corinna in real life
Staff member
Supporting Member
Joined
Feb 1, 2004
Messages
34,813
Reaction score
822
Location
Lower Saxony, Germany
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Is it Maribou Stork in English or Marabu Stork? For this instance I'm suddenly insecure as to how it is spelt... :scratch:
And I like the focus - but I'm with Forkie as to the tilt. Cool hairstyle! :D
 

The_Traveler

Completely Counter-dependent
Supporting Member
Joined
Dec 11, 2006
Messages
18,743
Reaction score
8,047
Location
Mid-Atlantic US
Website
www.lewlortonphoto.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Judging by the amount of hair that is in focus and the OOF of the beak, you have missed focus by a fit

dofh.jpg
 
OP
Diffuser

Diffuser

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 12, 2012
Messages
90
Reaction score
8
Location
Dubai
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Also, just as an afterthought, if you'd shot it straight his beak would have created a nice leading line from the bottom left to the top right, right up to his face. In this shot, his beak cuts the shot vertically in half. :)

I see what you mean. For illustration and learning purpose, this is the max rotation to get a better line up. Of cause the beak is now cut, but you are so right, it looks so much better when it's from bottom left to top right!
Thanks, amazing ;-)

Beauty2.jpg
 
OP
Diffuser

Diffuser

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 12, 2012
Messages
90
Reaction score
8
Location
Dubai
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Judging by the amount of hair that is in focus and the OOF of the beak, you have missed focus by a fit

dofh.jpg

Thanks for taking the time and verifying my settings, calculate and post this! It's exactly what I was wondering about the beak.

In real life when things go fast, how do you make sure you get this exactly correct? (49/51) seems so close, but yet, far away in result.
 

DiskoJoe

Been spending a lot of time on here!
Joined
Mar 24, 2011
Messages
4,540
Reaction score
528
Location
Houston
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
I think this one would go in with intelligent design
 

keethjon

TPF Noob!
Joined
Oct 12, 2010
Messages
64
Reaction score
0
Location
boston
Website
easybasicphotography.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Although I agree that the tilt is not natural, it kind of adds a humorous touch to the picture. I think it is a great shot overall.
 

Most reactions

New Topics

Top