beauty shoot. lovely lady

[rully]

she's one of my friend. she's not a model, yet (at least by profession).
she's only ordinary collage student, and she's willing to be my model just because i promised to take her out for dinner.

her name : AYU

these pictures taken using

canon EOS 20D
Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
lighting by golden eagle
location : Jakarta, Indonesia

please, critique and comment are very welcome

 

[max3k]

sounds like a date to me...gj

 

[Bordaine]

Take her to dinner again please. Nice eyes.

 

[UUilliam]

Yup, Her eyes are very seductive,
Her lips are really full and Great hair
Shes a keeper
Great images though although your pp is a tad soft on her skin on #2
When you use this method of PP you should always duplicate the original image (with spots and warts and scratches removed by clone tool but only enough so it keeps the texture of the skin)
and once you soften the skin you should then set the original (with no spots / scratches) at the top of the layers and lower the opacity so you still get the soft skin but retain the Texture of the skin.

 

[TriniPhototakeoutta]

Take her on more dates if that it what it takes to get more shots of her. lol. Nice shots. Softness works well. She has great eyes and lips. :thumbup:

 

[UUilliam]

Take her on more dates if that it what it takes to get more shots of her. lol. Nice shots. Softness works well. She has great eyes and lips. :thumbup:

Lol...
Most guys date women for sex
Photographers date women for pictures

 

[gopal]

the lady is very lovely...her lips and eyes are great, with an overall face....u can avail more chances (more dinners)to get good shots. thanks.

 

[musicaleCA]

Take her on more dates if that it what it takes to get more shots of her. lol. Nice shots. Softness works well. She has great eyes and lips. :thumbup:

Lol...
Most guys date women for sex
Photographers date women for pictures

Of if they're GWC's (guys with cameras), both. *sigh* The number of photog profiles on MM that are only bikini shots, and at best soft porn, is a little staggering. *rolls eyes*

She's definitely a keeper. If I may make a suggestion, pay closer attention to her hair. You need to keep checking long hair that it isn't getting in front of her eyes if you don't want it there, or covering the front of the neck unduly (as in the first image). Little frizzies in front of the neck are distracting. :-/

 

[Malania]

Great shots!

 

[ocular]

she's one of my friend. she's not a model, yet (at least by profession).

I don't believe you. She's so beautiful how could she not be.

 

[manaheim]

The first one was a little wonky for me, though I can't quite put my finger on why... maybe the fact that you're looking down? I'm honestly not sure.

I liked the second one very much. The pose, the expression, the framing... all really nice stuff.