Bedroom view for c&c

[Carla_]

This was literally taken behind my bedroom window. I appreciate any c&c. Would it be better to focus on a tree as a subject or the path like I did in this one? I am waiting for the right sky and plan on a reshoot soon.

TIA

Carla

 

[joealcantar]

Carla , you are in the central coast with great areas to shoot , get out and shoot.
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shoot well, Joe

 

[photo_joe]

I don't really think the path is defined enough. If you hadn't said it was a path I don't think I would have notice it was a path.

 

[Carla_]

Gotcha.

I thought it would be cool to shoot something I see every day. Guess I'll work on the comp some.

 

[Forkie]

I can't see any part of it which is in focus. There's also not a lot of interest in the shot - what is it a shot of, exactly? It looks like you live in what looks like a beautifully rugged area there. Get out there and find something interesting!