I am just starting to enjoy the look of black and white and would love some C&C on this shot , i have included the colour copy as well for discussion , thanks
The B&W is much more interesting to me, plus you have a colour cast from the reflection of the gold.II'm assuming her face is ment to be white, but its not. There is a bit of harsh light as well. Mibbies some diffusion on your flash might have helped