Birthday Blowout-I love this one-What do you think?

[stsinner]

I can'r remember if I posted this on on this particular forum, but if so, my apologies..

I love this picture and would like some feedback on it-negative or positive...

 

[Aye-non Oh-non Imus]

A pair of lips in the frame (spewing spittle) would add context. It looks like a cheek in the upper left, but it is indistinguishable to me.

Could have benefited with 1 to 1-1/2 stop more exposure.


Happy Birthday to the birthday person. Many happy returns.