Blacksmith: First time shooting people

[KmH]

2:

I had time to do an quick and dirty edit.
Your profile doesn't show an edit preference one way or the other.
So I'll delete the edit I've posted if you want me to.

 

[chuasam]

I like image 3 and 4 best.
The 1 and 2 have complex and weird shadows from your lighting.