Building shot from Asbury Park NJ

[cameramike]

well, if you know the town you know what its all about. a beautiful place that is starting to really come back. Spent most of Saturday over there (i'm about 10 minutes from there). I'm ready for some brutal critiques but i am personally VERY happy with how this picture came out, actually shot it while at a stop light so i was not able to get the perfect composition.

 

[Sideburns]

it's a cute little town. Looks like a neat place to live, until the lights go out.

 

[andrew07]

id try to focus more on taking pictures of the building in the center, great photo imo. the only thing that kills it for me is the sign above the door over on the left. but great photo none the less, good work!

 

[cameramike]

thanks, yea the f&h sign kills the hole untouched old city look of the photo. i tried cropping out the building on the left but it really needs that building to give the one in the center dimension

 

[andrew07]

yep, i agree totally, if not, the whole photo would be unbalanced.