By the Lake

[Jacob Ben Avraham]

Two young girls, by the lake, a breezy day, lost in thought, just taking a break, to think of things, yet to come, or just a pause to pass some time away. Granddaughters Alicia and Vanessa, Kendall, FLA

 

[Donde]

The focus is good on this one however you've included an awful lot of sky but lopped off the older girls foot. Makes for an awkward composition. Unless the (tilted) background is important to you why not crop way down to just the two girls.