C&C on my latest pic

[jamesdavidboro]

I took a stroll through my local Cemetry and snapped a few shots. I think this was the best.

Acklam Rd Cemetery Thornaby by jamesdavidboro2, on Flickr

 

[jamesdavidboro]

Exif info - 1/125, f/5.6, iso200, Focal Length 18mm

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

Technically the image isn't bad; it appears slightly under-exposed on my monitor, but artistically I'm not exactly wowed. I think focusing on the flowers has lost you the emotion and interest that may be been there. IMO, there's too much OOF area in the image.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[thruthelens]

A nice shot there, I see Sony still loves the colour Red, all their camera's seem to saturate it a little. If it was possible maybe shooting it against other foliage as a background as its so striking.