C&C please

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Jonathan Schertzer, Jan 1, 2010.

  1. Jonathan Schertzer

    Jonathan Schertzer TPF Noob!

    Aug 8, 2009
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    my only complaint is that the backround is a litte distracting.
    what do you guys think?[​IMG]

  2. Dominantly

    Dominantly TPF Noob!

    Jul 30, 2009
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    It's an interesting water scape shot, with what looks like a water ferry coming through the foreground.

    So with shots where you stop down and bring more detail into the shot, It's important to have a story to tell with the shot. The foreground, the middle, and rear need to tie together, or bring interest to the photo.

    If your main objective was to draw attention to the small boat, then I think it might be a bit overwhelmed. Plus, it would be my preference to see the boat on the right side of the photo, so it looks like it has more room to go before running out of the photo.

    Looks like a nice area, reminds me of Victoria BC.

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