C&C Please

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  1. shmne

    shmne No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I disagree with cropping the image, I believe it is spot on. To me the message is quite clear, he has her on his mind. Empty box of beer, so he is probably drunk.

    I like this! The only thing I could think of to make it a bit more clear is possibly arranging the box differently. Since this is already done with though, honestly there isn't anything to change.


     
  2. Insanity

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    This would work too. I've never tried to have someone sit still for 30 seconds but I know I can sit in a barbers chair for a while and still be pretty still. So I dunno... experiment I guess. :)
     
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    really well done!
     
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    Very creative, I love the way you have complemented the colours of the 'Ghosts' with the walls, the creams, browns and little splash of red are all picked up. To me its saying 'I miss my lady', like she has died and this is the place they would have walked together, the sadness in his face completes this assumption. I think the lighting is just right and it could well be a painting
     

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