C&C please

[endless3coma]

2 of the first shoots I have done. thanks in advance.

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[fokker]

#1 is nice but you missed the focus slightly on her face.

#2 looks like she is posing for a different photographer

#3 is an interesting pose, not particularly flattering though. The image is a bit noisy as well (ISO 1600) and a little blurred (1/30s shutter speed). It's probably a little bit overexposed as well, and you can see the background where it should be all black.

 

[endless3coma]

Thanks. Storing that in my head for later! appreciate it