Cake Smash critique/comments?

[tmjjk]

 

[Braineack]

this is all i see:





I don't feel like the lower right picture fits in this, but looks like a very successful smash.

 

[paigew]

These photos are very small so I can't really comment on focus. The major thing that sticks out to me is the WB seems very cool. Other than that I think you captured a great cake smash! My favorites are #4&5

 

[ColorfulMonochrome]

Definitely a bit on the cool side (wb), but otherwise it's very nice. Great cake smash and expressions! I also love the watermark! I'm a sucker for celestial stuff.

 

[paigew]

I don't feel like the lower right picture fits in this, but looks like a very successful smash.

I sort of feel the same about that last photo. Hard to tell if it is a hand or foot.

 

[The_Traveler]

the pictures are fine but it seems an odd lesson for the child to model.

 

[Derrel]

The third shot, of the child looking out of the collage just ruins it...move that picture over to the RIGHT-HAND side, and then the kid will be "looking into" the collage. Otherwise, pretty good.

 

[sashbar]

What is missing here is an untouched cake right in the middle. I want to see "before and after" collage.

 

[jenko]

These are pretty cute. Darrel makes a good point about moving the 3rd image. Also, his skin tone in that image looks a little too blue/green. Overall, fun set!

 

[frommrstomommy]

This is me echoing everything that's already been said.. child looking out of frame, WB, the hand/foot unidentifiable bottom right thing. lol Cute though! I love outdoor cake smashes.

 

[marie1128]

I agree that I'd also like to see a "before and after" cake smash collage. Very cute though.