California Beach Photo's (Critique Welcomed)

Kjar

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Went to a radom beach in California, shot some photos. I'm an amateur with a Sony compact camera. This post is both for the forums enjoyment and to get some ctitique back on my photo's. (No post production has been done.)

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The last is my favorite. It has imo the strongest composition with the pier leading our eyes out, intersecting the ocean right on the rule of thirds [emoji2] I'd love to see it in color.
 
The last one is good, much sharper then the first b&w.
 
When you post more than one or two images, it would help folks who want to review them if you would number them. This makes it a lot easier for a reviewer to refer to any particular image instead of having to flip back and forth to ensure they are commenting on the right one. It also makes it easier to refer to them by number in any review.

WesternGuy
 
I like the last one. I think it looks good as a B&W.
 
So, let's see. Number the pictures, do a little post production leveling and the last B&W is best for its clarity and composition. Thanks for chiming in!
 

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