smurf4t
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Hi all
I'm Tanja , i'm new to photography. But not a beginner. Just looking for some advice and critique of my latest pictures of my friends kids. I love child photography and am looking to enhance my skill.
Thank you.
Designer said:I think the color saturation has been pushed beyond realistic.
cgipson1 said:Can you please explain how you are NEW to photography, but not a beginner? I am curious!
On the images.. darling girls... but all the critique above it 100% totally correct! Very soft..
KmH said:All I would add is my opinion that the camera position was to high in both shots, both images look to be under exposed, and have white balance issues. It looks like there may have been some incandescent lighting nearby that gave each photo a yellowish color cast.
tirediron said:Critique per req:
1. As mentioned, the image is very soft; I can't say for sure without the EXIF data, but because I can't see anything sharp, I'm going to assume motion-blur (shutter-speed too low). The lighting is acceptable, but rather bland; a little more contrast would have helped greatly, and the composition needs to be opened up a little more. It's fine to crop limbs when necessary, but always do it boldly, never at/near/through a joint and NEVER along a lateral axis! The eyes appear rather over-processed.
2. Comments pretty much as per #1; watch the disembodied arm lower RH corner (again, composition/crop too tight), and watch the background elements. The bit of red (chair back?) and the two-tone wall behind are bother rather distracting.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
Can you please explain how you are NEW to photography, but not a beginner?
All I would add is my opinion that the camera position was to high in both shots, both images look to be under exposed, and have white balance issues.
Can you please explain how you are NEW to photography, but not a beginner? I am curious!
Designer said:I think the color saturation has been pushed beyond realistic.
Agreed! Tone down the eyes right?