City Dweller

[edge0freason]

Here are quite a few pictures of my girlfriend. We went to the slums of a near by city and found ourselves in an abandoned apartment. I thought some were pretty good, but id appreciate hypercritical opinions.

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thanks

 

[Harmony]

6 is, BY FAR, my favourite, and i feel 3 and 4 are too dark... they don't do much for me.

 

[edge0freason]

yeah, i didnt quite get what i wanted from those pictures:meh:

 

[niforpix]

Pretty good. I would've used fill flash on #3 and 4.

 

[Emerana]

I like 1 and 6 the best. Good series overall...some blown out issues, crop issues and lighting but I think very nice I think

 

[Emerana]

In 3 - If you shot in raw, maybe try adjusting the exposure a tiny bit and add some noise to make them more...gritty.

 

[edge0freason]

thanks for the tips. all of these are very lightly edited. i shot in jpeg so idk if theres much i can do. would a fill flash achieved the silhouette look? thanks for the responses