No longer a newbie, moving up!
- Jan 20, 2016
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Just wondering what you think of these portraits? Do any of them appeal to you? Thanks for the cc.
Yes and no. I like the direction you're going, but I'm not 100% sure you're there yet. In the first, I'd prefer to see either all of her hands & arms or none. The horizontal crop through the arms doesn't work IMO. Additionally, I would prefer to see her moved off to the side. You have a lot of empty space on both sides which is adding little to the composition. Shifting her to one side or the other might have given it some balance (and speaking of 'balance', your WB looks a tad off).
Her positioning in the second image is much better IMO, 'though the dark background and bright area above serve to pull the viewer's eye away from the subject.
Again, in the last one, I'd like to see her moved to one side or the other. That said, all of these are nice ambient light images.