College Siblings C&C Please

[kric2schaam626]

Hi all, I did these pics for some very good friends of mine in March. Just came across them on my external, thought I'd share for any C&C. Let me know what you think, thanks!

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[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1, 2. I can't say these do much for me, they appear rather 'snap-shottish' and not overly interesting.

3, 4. These both have a lot of potential, and show much more creativity and interest. They also both share some common issues, specifically the blowing hair obscuring their faces and over-bright highlights. I think ideally some fill light to reduce the dynamic range would have helped.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[misstwinklytoes]

I like 2 and 3, but Dudes hair in face is annoying. The stuff in upper right of #1 is distracting.

 

[NiceShot]

4 is my favorite by far but 2-4 look a little over exposed to me.

 

[Morpheuss]

looks like all of these are a little over exposed

 

[kric2schaam626]

I like 2 and 3, but Dudes hair in face is annoying. The stuff in upper right of #1 is distracting.

Yeah . . . he has a thing about his hair . . . he is a little snotty. Not much I could do.

Thanks everyone else. Since then I have been keeping better tabs on my exposure levels.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

I like 2 and 3, but Dudes hair in face is annoying. The stuff in upper right of #1 is distracting.

Yeah . . . he has a thing about his hair . . . he is a little snotty. Not much I could do.

I'd bet he loves the last one then, lol. Ah, if he likes it then I suppose that's what they wanted!