Constructive criticism?

[stooetc]

Hey there,

I recently got a cheap film SLR from a friend and have been having a lot of fun with it, but I'm not really sure if what I'm doing is "any good", if you know what I mean. Having looked around the forum you folks seem to be good at constructive criticism, I was wondering if you could offer some advice on the photos I've been taking.

Are they a bit derivative? Have I tinkered a bit too much with them on the computer? Any and all feedback would be lovely. Thanks.

 

[KmH]

Yes, they look very overprocessed. Perhaps the originals could stand on their own.