couple of portraits C&C please

JWest09

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went to the lake the other day for a shoot, just for fun. C&C please

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Interesting shots. I quite like them :)
 
I think 1 and 3 are the best... on #1, the focus seems slightly off. Don't know if that was intentional or not, but I think it'd be better if it were sharply locked on the eye. Love B/W portraits though. Nice. :)
 
2 & 3 kinda remind me of Andy from Weeds heee!

Haha thats what I was thinking when I saw them!

I like #3 the best, the vignetting is a little intense on the top right corner though.
 
I think #1 is your shot out of all of these. The B&W conversion masks (or actually uses to enhance) some of the issues with the others.

#2 and #3 have some pretty serious hot-spot issues as well as some posterization. In #4, your subject gets lost and the composition is a bit dull/snapshot-ish.

#1 has a lot of things to say, though. The shadows work well bringing the glove in as the second element in the composition, framing/etc work. Very much like a shot that might see the inside CD booklet or something. Nice.
 

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