Courtney - Grad

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C&C is appreciated. Thanks!

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[tirediron]

Nice set Kristal; my only thoughts are: (1) I don't like the wooden ??? behind her head in #1; it really seems to mess up the background, and (2) I think a vertial orientation and pose where either the tattoo is more visible or not visible. As-is, it's somewhat of a distraction.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[The_Traveler]

Of this set, imo, #5 is the best and really terrific. - great composition, natural pose and smile, good color. She has the problem that in a full-on, straight-on smile (in #1), her chin looks full. In other poses, see 3 & 5, she looks older elegant and quite lovely.

#2 is quite nice but the framing is off. Too much space at the top and her skin areas are much too bright.
I would burn those down, crop it, and make the logo MUCH smaller.

By lewislorton at 2011-06-10

 

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Thanks for the comments.

tirediron: I know what you mena about the background in 1 - I dont know how I didn't see that while framing my shot. I couldnt decide if it was passable or not after the fact...


The_Traveler: Yes, she is a bit bright in 2. These were quick edits on my laptop, and the skin will be recoverable. Thanks for the heads up

 

[dallasimagery]

Don't care for any of these... I'll mainly comment on #1, but in general, I'd recommend a good book on posing. #1 looks kinda soft to me on my monitor, and the composition is very square and static. The processing is lacking pop, etc.

 

[fudsylow]

I like 3.

 

[Big Mike]

The one overall think that I noticed was the posing. #1 is too straight on, #2 has her body straight on and she'd looking off frame.
The last one is much better IMO. That slight head tilt gives her a much more feminine pose, although that pose causes her shoulders to look bigger than necessary.

 

[Jason_Moore]

i never got into grad photography. is there okay money in them? what's the price range in them? i do weddings mostly.

 

[The_Traveler]

i never got into grad photography. is there okay money in them? what's the price range in them? i do weddings mostly.

Have you considered starting a new thread with this question rather than asking a complex question at the bottom of a days old thread and perhaps derailing it from the OP's purpose?

 

[D-B-J]

I like them, but my only critique is that you seemed to focus on the nails and not the eyes in one, which really detracts from the photo. Granted, i am not qualified to give comments on posing and such, but aesthetically i like them.

Regards,
Jake