Criticism for Improvement pls

[Sharfy]

Here i am again ^^ I need your comments for this
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What do you think about this?

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[KevinPutman]

I'd like it more if her neck/etc were in focus as well.

 

[rlemert]

I think you have an unfortunate interaction going on between those streaks of light cutting across her temple and her eye shadow. It kind of makes the yellow in the makeup look like it's something being projected onto her face.

 

[Derrel]

I think you have an unfortunate interaction going on between those streaks of light cutting across her temple and her eye shadow. It kind of makes the yellow in the makeup look like it's something being projected onto her face.

I look at it exactly opposite--to me those streaks of light look simply amazing! WHat I think of when I see this photo is the control of the lighting--excellent.

 

[Sharfy]

Thank you guys for the replies and comments

 

[AUG19]

I don't like the blurred effect or the make-up.

 

[kfvanc]

IMO my eyes are going to the clumpy mascara and the lip line off which detracts from her beauty.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Can we see the SOOC?