CRITIQUE ME!

[JakeMonty]

What I mean to say is Please critique my photography. I am rather new and I am attempting to hone my skills as much as possible while being without a camera on deployment. Any and all input is much appreciated

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[KmH]

Critique:

Online, using all caps is tantamonunt to shouting. Your thread title sounds more like a command than a request, because you left out a word...Please.

Few, if any, will take the time and make the effort to wade through all the photos in the link you posted to comment.

Post a couple photos at a time here, in the thread.

 

[LaFoto]

In addition to what KmH says, I must say that I find it difficult to critique you, as I don't know you at all...! All I know is that you obviously order us to critique you, and that makes you "bossy" in my opinion, but that is all I can say about YOU, actually.
Oh. Oops, you want us to critique YOUR PHOTOGRAPHY? Please?
Well, if your gallery should be on flickr, you can easily copy and paste the

 

[JakeMonty]

Critique:

Online, using all caps is tantamonunt to shouting. Your thread title sounds more like a command than a request, because you left out a word...Please.

Few, if any, will take the time and make the effort to wade through all the photos in the link you posted to comment.

Post a couple photos at a time here, in the thread.

In addition to what KmH says, I must say that I find it difficult to critique you, as I don't know you at all...! All I know is that you obviously order us to critique you, and that makes you "bossy" in my opinion, but that is all I can say about YOU, actually.
Oh. Oops, you want us to critique YOUR PHOTOGRAPHY? Please?
Well, if your gallery should be on flickr, you can easily copy and paste the -line among the URLs offered into threads on here and voilà, there will be your photo. And then we could critique THAT instead of yourself, who we don't even know! ;-)[/QUOTE]

Thank you for those words, sometimes when in a rush its easy to forget about how the diction of my typing will be perceived. I suppose this isn't Facebook where everyone knows me and knows that yelling is just a playful occasion :)

I have edited my post to links to just 2 photos and much better words usage :) unfortunately I couldn't change the title though. lol. Thanks again.