Critique needed please

I haven't done a lot of portrait photography but have been inspired by the images on this site, so I got myself a off camera flash and a few bits and pieces and these are my first shots.
I didn't have any control over the clothes and would have preferred at least not a black top.
Tried to get the catchlight but not sure if I have overdone it.
Any advice would be appreciated.

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Very nice start. I remember from the TV operators school that white BG should be tiny overexposed and Black one a bit underexposed. But you should highlight the subject a bit more. Anyway, nice pictures.
 

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