Critque Please

[li1m4n]

Hello, I am taking an Intro to Photogrophy class, and I am recieving VERY bad grades on my photos. I do not understand why this is happening. Can someone tell me why my pictures are bad?

Photogram Assignment:

Time & Space Assignment:

Close Up

Close Up

Far/ Close

Action Assignment:

Frozen

Blurred


Here are some Other one's I took, but did not turn in for grade:

 

[ksm]

Not that it really matters but just curious, are those photos film or digital?

 

[noob873]

This should be in like general gallery or something but whatever.
I just dont find any of these very interesting. Just random things you're taking pictures of, nothing that really catches attention.
The only one I kind of like is teh second one you didnt turn in to get graded. Simply because Im not sure what it is. I would suggest cropping it so its in the top right corner or the picture.

 

[li1m4n]

These are all film

 

[ghpham]

Did you not ask your instructor why you got bad grades??

 

[skieur]

As a former teacher of photography, this work displays no understanding whatsoever of composition or for that matter the basics of black and white photography either.

Get back to the books, web sites, and the theory. Look at www.photoinf.com for some basics on composition. Black and white requires a considerable grey scale and tonal range which is not present in any of your shots, let alone any centre of interest or sense of what you are trying to photograph or communicate to the viewer.

You would certainly flunk my courses.

skieur

 

[crystal_lynn]

I agree with above, there is nothing interesting, the composition is aweful, and the colors are flat.

SOrry...