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[mpdc]

I took some of the suggestions. Not sure how well it is. The Ice doesnt look right. Anyways here is a try.

 

[Hertz van Rental]

The ice looks wrong because you used real ice.
You should use acrylic ice cubes.

On a secondary point. You have posted it in the Crit Gallery without observing the guidelines - that is, telling us what you want help with (type of crit).
I'm moving it to the General Gallery so you can get some feedback.

 

[mpdc]

The ice looks wrong because you used real ice.
You should use acrylic ice cubes.

On a secondary point. You have posted it in the Crit Gallery without observing the guidelines - that is, telling us what you want help with (type of crit).
I'm moving it to the General Gallery so you can get some feedback.

Aye.

Last time I posted one people didnt want to critique it because it was in general gallery.
However understood.

I should use FAKE ice?