D-I-E is for Diesel

[Browncoat]

The more I read and learn about different styles, the more I have enjoyed urban decay photos and "grunge" style editing. I think this is my best shot to date:

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Would have been nice if you crouched down a little more and framed out DIE so it was clear.

 

[khallene]

Pic looks good. I agree w/ bitter about framing the DIE a little more

 

[Ron Evers]

Aside from the above comments I would capture less foreground (pavement) & take in more of the buildings.

 

[pbelarge]

I am not sure what it is, but I get lost in this photo. There are lines going in all directions.
I would also get lower to capture the DIE if that was my focus. I would also shoot in much closer, tighten the shot up some.
We all have different desires in a shot, this one does not capture me.

 

[gsgary]

Doesn't do much for me, shooting the benal is a lot harder than people thihk take a look at Stephen Shaw or William Eggleston for ideas

 

[Browncoat]

Thanks for the comments, guys...much appreciated. This location is just a few miles from me, so I will take everything into consideration and take some additional shots.