Dandelion Girl

[epsilon]

Hi it's my first post. I'd like to share a photo of my friend's daughter. She is a very lively model, though
Photographing is my hobby, however, I aim to do it a bit better in the future, so could I as for a bit of criticism here, please.

1. Dandelion Girl picture by epsilon10 - Photobucket

2. http://s1087.photobucket.com/albums/j471/epsilon10/?action=view&current=IMG_5811flowers.jpg

 

[CBURKE]

There you go.

 

[epsilon]

Thx

 

[molested_cow]

Looks more like she's stuck on the tree!

Definitely need to lower the shutter speed to avoid blur. I am not sure what happened to the exposure, look under exposed to me.

 

[The_Traveler]

Come on, give this little girl a break.
Her face is back in the deep shadow surrounded by brilliant yellow flowers with brilliant sun showing through the branches and wearing two shades of bright color.

Minimize the distractions, maximize what you think is important.
Face lightened, everything else lowered brilliance, saturation and distractions, removed blueish tint from shadows, and raised red valiues on her face.

And cropped so she dominates the picture soace more.

 

[epsilon]

Thank you, it does indeed look much better. I really appreciate your feedback. (But don't worry, we had a lot of fun on that day, to!