Daughter at White Sands, NM

[kowalczyk86]

I have a previous thread with my "undoctored" photos, at White Sands, but I decided to start a new thread for these couple that I fixed up a tad. I am not a pro by any means, this only took me a couple minutes.. What do you think?

I know the top one seems a little grainy..

Shawn

 

[er111a]

Selective coloring in the first one not working.
like to see the eyes more in the second.
I like the third

 

[j-digg]

Maybe try cropping #3 into 5x4 (10x8 print dimensions) and exclude the left side of the frame? I did like the color version of that one, just seemed to need some WB correction was all, with that said its nice as monochrome too.