Day before studio deadline...

chente922

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1. One of my best girl friends, sad protrait the day before studio deadline at architecture school.... she looks frustrated
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I think you've got a good shot here, but it's underexposed. I think you should try playing around with tones to bring out highlights, which this photo lacks completely.
 

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I also think whatever it was you did to her skin is

a) inconsistent
b) exaggerated in places (left corner of her mouth, etc)

Does she have bad skin?

I like the shot.. her eyes, her expression.. but playing around with it will make it more interesting for sure, plus the retouching of her skin needs more thoroughness.
 

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i like the composition, but it needs more contrast, i think.
the backround is the light level same as the subject and the lack of any true whites or blacks take away from the photo i think
 

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Some dodge strokes in the eyes/teeth areas would be an easy way to add emphasis. Not going to fix what's mentioned above, but could definitely add some interest and range. At least, I think it could.
 

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I wish I could play with the original one some :D cause I really like her face and expression.
 

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