DC Golden Eagle

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  1. bottumboy622

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    Im very new to photography so this is one of my first attempts. Feedback PLEASE!! $Eagle Cut Out.jpg


     
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    I must be missing somthing........troll perhaps?
     
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    Sorry?
     
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    looks simply like a computer generated logo. What did you photograph?
     
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    Um I don't know where to start
    Low grade pixels
    Just a horrible picture
     
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    Jaemie No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It's an iPhone photo of etched stone or something. Very simple composition doesn't say much to me beyond it's an etched stone or something. The reflections interest me more than the other elements.
     
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    It looks like trees are behind it
     
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    Excuse me? Its a monument in Washington DC
     
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    Never said you had to be a Richard about it
     
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    you're excused.
    "open up" the crop a bit, change the angle rather than dead on, include some foreground per haps........overall add somthing to draw an eye into the photo. This subject needs that because in itself just isn't doing it; it does just look like a computer generated logo.
     
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    Thank you! Thats what i wanted to hear
     
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    Tony S Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The problem is that it looks like a single graphic design to be used in something, there is nothing there to place a context it is used in. In this case it was used on a memorial, but without anything around it one cannot relate it to the memorial. Do you have any other images of it with more of the memorial or surroundings included? An image including those things would ad interest and put a place to the design.
     
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