This will sound contradictory (in light of my comment above). I'm a firm believer that, in disciplines in which creativity is involved, you only get better when you receive constructive criticism and positive reinforcement. Mocking doesn't work. I hope you didn't find my fallout shelter comment offensive, because that was not the intention.
The sooner you outgrow the hyper-saturated HDR look (like Charlie mentioned), the faster you'll find yourself taking photos you'll be proud of for years. I saw that you take photos in abandoned buildings, so you're already on the right path
The main problem i felt is that the upper half of the image is not matching with the bottom half-storm above and a spring below!!!. Why some bungalow or something glowing there? e-rose (she is back) would call this nuclear.......
...and I knew Invisible would euphemistically revisit as he has done . One could have easily guessed that from his etiquette all we know