“Evening Snap Shot...” (Levittown, NY)

[enezdez14]

Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.

Enezdez

 

[sleist]

Lots of leading lines leading nowhere. Are the leading lines supposed to be the subject? Is it the bike?
Not much visual payoff here either way.

Subjective thought - the processing is not complimentary.
Seems heavy handed, but then I prefer non-tinted monochrome processing with digital conversions so maybe it's just me.

I can see why you took the shot, but it just doesn't work for me.

 

[enezdez14]

Lots of leading lines leading nowhere. Are the leading lines supposed to be the subject? Is it the bike?
Not much visual payoff here either way.

Subjective thought - the processing is not complimentary.
Seems heavy handed, but then I prefer non-tinted monochrome processing with digital conversions so maybe it's just me.

I can see why you took the shot, but it just doesn't work for me.

The lines were suppose to be the subject, my real issue with the shot is in my opinion it is a little soft due to the aperture f/4.5. I think I should of closed down a little more like maybe f/5.6 but i was afraid of causing the lights to flare like stars...that's why it's tinted to mask the softness...

Or at least it was my attempt...

Thanks for your input!

Cheers,

Enezdez