MichaelHenson
No longer a newbie, moving up!
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Especially when the subjects are 5 years and younger (besides the parents) in age!
I've considered working my way into that "birthday party/photojournalistic" niche and so, when my daughter was invited to a friend's party at the pumpkin patch, I offered my photographic services. Here are some of my results.
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My critique:
1. Many of these are centered rather than taking into account the rule of thirds...I'll work on it.
2. There are some less than ideal backgrounds and foregrounds...I understand that I need to do a better job keeping those clear but in events such as this, timing is everything and with everyone running around (parents and children), keeping things technically perfect can be difficult.
3. Raccoon eyes. Some of my photos ended up having raccoon eyes...I know that I need to put in some time working with my flash (maybe even bounced on camera) to avoid raccoon eyes if at all possible...
4. Posing? What's that? In this case, I did one semi-posed photo...not even that really...Posing is something that may or may not fit in the context of child birthday party? I dunno...
Anyway, any thoughts, critiques, etc. are welcome!
I've considered working my way into that "birthday party/photojournalistic" niche and so, when my daughter was invited to a friend's party at the pumpkin patch, I offered my photographic services. Here are some of my results.
1.

2.

3.

4.

My critique:
1. Many of these are centered rather than taking into account the rule of thirds...I'll work on it.
2. There are some less than ideal backgrounds and foregrounds...I understand that I need to do a better job keeping those clear but in events such as this, timing is everything and with everyone running around (parents and children), keeping things technically perfect can be difficult.
3. Raccoon eyes. Some of my photos ended up having raccoon eyes...I know that I need to put in some time working with my flash (maybe even bounced on camera) to avoid raccoon eyes if at all possible...
4. Posing? What's that? In this case, I did one semi-posed photo...not even that really...Posing is something that may or may not fit in the context of child birthday party? I dunno...
Anyway, any thoughts, critiques, etc. are welcome!
