Fashion Photoshoot

[shortpballer]

Got my first big break living in Paris and got lucky enough to for a big designer which must be unnamed at this time. Shot with Phase One P30+ and 35mm HC. C&C please

 

[MissCream]

Love the lighting in this, great shot imo

 

[CCericola]

My eye is drawn to the mannequin on the far left. Is that one of the designer's coats?

 

[shortpballer]

All the clothing in the picture is the designers...

 

[CCericola]

Ok, then the photo makes more sense. The only think that bothers me is the wrinkles in the suit on the right mannequin. They don't look like they are supposed to be there. I want to reach in and fix the sleeve.

 

[JAC526]

The whole image has detail, even in the shadows, except for the top right. I think the featureless black detracts from the rest of the image.

Otherwise great shot and Congratulations.

 

[Derrel]

I told you you'd make it! Congrats!

 

[ronjohn]

great image overall. I'd prefer more focus on the man though. The mannequins are so much larger they bring my attention to them a lot.

 

[camz]

I think it will sell espcially with the nice designer logo upfront on the carpet IMO. I just don't mind for a partly shown door or hallway on the left side of the image.


Again this one's for the ones who made it baby through some elbow grease. Congrats dude!

 

[Alpha]

1. I don't get it, which makes me find the mannequins distracting. I suspect they're part of whatever I'm not getting.
2. I think the rim lighting is too strong.

 

[Phtoo]

find the rim light a bit strong. and not sure what the intention of the image is? it almost has a creepy vibe. lots of shadow and the mannequins take the attention so much. dont feel like i get much of a feel of the designer, just stare at the back of a coat on the left .

 

[Iron Flatline]

Congratulations!!