Thanks man. I like the nit-picky comments, it keeps me on my toes. I thought about removing the bow on her chest in Photoshop but decided against it as it's part of the clothing design and this was a shoot for the clothing designer. It would be like removing Cindy Crawford's mole. Well, not quite, but you get my drift.
About the lacking the "pow" factor comment... It's a clothing shot meant for a catalog so I can't get too crazy. Heck, I was pushing the limits with this shot as it was in terms of being just a little too "crazy" for what was wanted. Luckily everyone likes the shot so I got away with it.
Here's a sample shot of what the client was looking for:
I would take the bow out, as an avid female shopper it's annoying and feel like I need to fix it for her. Great shots other wise! I always enjoy your work.