I think that this framing could be improved.
Everything is in the top left and the father's head is clipped.
I would crop as below to make the baby the obvious center and cut off what doesn't contribute. Then darken all the bright shirts and vignette enough to keep the viewer's eyes in.
Thanks for the edits! I actually made it warmer like that, and then removed it. lol I think I'll give them a b&w and a warmer version when all is said and done because I do really like it warmed up too.
Wow, those prices are great! I've been dragging my feet on getting some canvases made for my own home and scared to order from those places that offer those big discounts and such. Totally bookmarking that one. Thanks!