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I think taking photos it's a matter of how that experience could best be portrayed in a way that will meet the comfort levels of a lot of different people who may view the photos. Emphasizing the entire experience, which for me would probably include seeing babies' and moms' faces and expressions, could work in portraying the subject (what may be natural or comfortable for some people may not be for everyone).
To me some of the B&W look various shades of gray, they might be better adjusted for more black or white. In the first one I can't make out the mom's head (even though I know that is what the dark shape is); there's one in a later set that has part of a chair and cart near mom's head, the edges of puzzles? the edge of a mat in front of the door etc. - those seem to make for distractions more than part of the scene.
If you look at it as shapes and patterns there are some shapes in different tones/shades that you can see are part of something, but I think it works better to either have it completely in the picture or keep it out of the frame. In the smaller set there's one that shows just a mom's arm and a baby's leg and a diaper which seems in too close and makes it hard to really see what the picture is about. In some the moms' hair has strands going different directions and the clothing has designs and/or creases in clothing etc. that can create patterns that can make for distractions.
I think in some the perspective is too directly overhead; when you're holding a baby you would be looking from one side or the other since the baby's usually in one arm or the other. Shooting from a different angle you might make for a better perspective for the viewer.
Thank you for taking the time to write all of that out. I am always happy to hear opinions of my work. But it is critiques like this, that are the reason I am hesitant and I do not post more of my work. I chose the first few images because I thought they were my 'strongest' (technically + artistically) images. And would be most widely accepted (here). People wanted to see more, so I gladly obliged

and of course they are got picked apart...as I knew they would.
I really hate posting images and then "defending" them. Mainly because I feel work should speak for itself. I know some don't like my editing and/or shooting style, I'm ok with that. Everything I do is purposeful. If I wanted moms face brighter I certainly know how to achieve that look. If I want more black or white...in my b/w I can do that. These photos are supposed to be "as is". Some were taken at a playground with random kids running up and all around. Some were taken in a (very small) ice cream parlor. And although I did move many distractions, I couldn't move everything (even though the OCD in me was cringing)

As it is a place of business.
As for shooting angle, I try to shoot nursing photos very discretely. If I shoot from the other side (so you can see mom and baby) , you will see a lot of boob. I would rather not focus on the boob, and instead focus on the art/act of nursing. In addition to body position you have to think about what mom is wearing. The twin mama had a shirt that lifted up, completely exposing her stomach so I had to position myself accordingly.
When I am doing these types of "documentary" photos I do not pay attention to the clothing creases. The toddler posted above nursed a combined time of 3 minutes. If I would have gone in to adjust moms clothes, he surely would have latched off. And anyway, this is real life. We don't have people fixing our clothes and hair. This isn't a "portrait".
I personally love the overhead angle. It is one of my favorites I do at every newborn shoot
