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Just joined and this is my first post. Im just getting into photography and have lots to learn. Here are a few photos of mine, any feedback would be appreciated.
 

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#1 the horizon doesn't look straight, and i'm seeing some haloing. looks like a HDR, which i don't really think contributes much to that shot.
#2 great shot :laughing:
#3 crop is maybe a little tight, but i like it
#4 subject feels like she is falling out of frame, uninteresting composition, and the crop is a bit narrow.
#5 i like it, although i think a B&W conversion would do it justice
#6 really like this shot. nice work
 

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Thread moved from Welcomes and Introductions to the General Gallery
 

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#1 the horizon doesn't look straight, and i'm seeing some haloing. looks like a HDR, which i don't really think contributes much to that shot.
#2 great shot :laughing:
#3 crop is maybe a little tight, but i like it
#4 subject feels like she is falling out of frame, uninteresting composition, and the crop is a bit narrow.
#5 i like it, although i think a B&W conversion would do it justice
#6 really like this shot. nice work

^^^^"What he said"! ^^^^
Very good comments.
 

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You have a good eye and the processing is generally good (exc. cut off and burnt out hat in one of them). I like the last, but it looks just a bit too green to me - could be this lousy work monitor though.
 

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Excellent images.... I see great talent in you.... every image is compelling to watch ...Wishing you All The Best and More :thumbsup:
 
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Thank you all for the feedback.

Kenc - what photo were you referring to when you mentioned the not so good processing?
 

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#1 the horizon doesn't look straight, and i'm seeing some haloing. looks like a HDR, which i don't really think contributes much to that shot.
#2 great shot :laughing:
#3 crop is maybe a little tight, but i like it
#4 subject feels like she is falling out of frame, uninteresting composition, and the crop is a bit narrow.
#5 i like it, although i think a B&W conversion would do it justice
#6 really like this shot. nice work

^^^^"What he said"! ^^^^
Very good comments.

<3
 

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Thank you all for the feedback.

Kenc - what photo were you referring to when you mentioned the not so good processing?

I said it was generally good. The only things I thought were a little off were the two I mentioned - the hat in the one center right (you really need to number them!) and the one on the bottom right which looked a little green to me.
 

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